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Thursday, October 17, 2013
Chapter 9 What if....
What would it LOOK LIKE to humans if the Sky and the Sea went to war?
Post your description in a comment below. We should be able to visualize your war scene.
Classmates will vote on the best description after everyone has posted.
When Zeus an Poseidon go to war and fight, the "Earth" in the middle of them will be just completely destroyed. With the power of both of them it would probably be like a tornado meets a tsunami would be hurt or even killed, because, they can do a lot of damage with their powers. I think "the Earth" would become a huge piece of something like an ocean or a lake, because Poseidon would win!!
If Zeus and Poseidon go to war, the sky and the ocean would go to war too. Good people will die if this happens. Things will happen for no reason like hurricanes, tsuhhains and tornadoes the ocean and the sky will be in bad shape. Who can stop the war!
Due to the terrible fight between Zeus and Poseidon a bunch of storms were created. The sun became sad. It was not able to smile and shine because Zeus clouded the weather from the sky. The sky and the sea have been so mad at each other they created rain, lightning, and tornados. One tornado turned to a dark grey color and spinned hatefully through the land. Suddenly the sea reacts and sends a massive tsunami. I think all of this would happen if they began a war. Hopefully Percy will find out what really happened when he go's on the quest and reports everything when he gets back, so there will be no war between Zeus and Poseidon.
When Zeus and Poseidon start fighting bad things start to happen. The waves start to crash and the lighting starts to roar and that's how we know that Zeus and Poseidon are at war!. During this fight, homes would be gone and the world would be devastated because with every punch the world would start to go down and there would be nowhere to go to stay alive. Billions of people would be homeless and thousands would be dead. The earth would be split open and lava would come oozing out.
If Zeus and Poseidon went to war again it would be a tragedy on the whole world! Things would start happening because the gods have created it. Such as hurricanes, earthquakes, and even floods. The last time there was a war like this it was between Zeus and Poseidon kids and that cause World War Two! Now imagine that! If their kids can cause something that big then what can they do? And reminding that Zeus is the god of the skies and Poseidon is the god of the sea and earthquakes. So we’re talking about homes being destroyed and people getting killed in ways that you can't even imagine. The waves would be strong the skies would be so dark you couldn't tell if it was night or day, things would be blown left to right. The earth would be destroyed.
Hurricanes and Lightning are coming ! Hurricanes will damage people’s house’s, cars. Trees will be getting knocked down by the strong wind. Lightning will light up the dark sky, lightning will also damage power, by people not having electricity in their home.
The lightning flashes and crackles in the sky!!! With loud noises and its dark outside. The hurricane is getting closer and the wind is blowing 50 mph while rain is coming down. Zeus is fighting Poseidon as lightning flashes in the sky. While Poseidon is frightening back the hurricane is getting worse. Percy is going to find the light bulb in the underworld and give it back to Zeus.
If Zeus and Poseidon ever had a war the war would be very stormy and bad.
Thunder and lightning would make the skies dark ,cloudy and a lot of heated wind blowing around. Flooding would be a lot of water traveling and damaging things. Zeus would be striking lightning with all his might in the sky to fight Poseidon. Poseidon would also be fighting back with strong, furious waves to fight back Zeus to defend himself. Percy also helps Zeus by going to the underworld to get the lightening bolt to bring back to Zeus to help him.
If the sky and sea got into a war there would be a lot of rain pounding on the ground and lighting crackling in the sky. The sea would crash against the edges of land crashing erosion and flooding. The black sky would like mid-night over the sea spinning like a mixer was put on high!
If Zeus and Poseidon go to war it could effect the whole mortal world! If the war is bad enough it could kill every one in the world. Zeus and Poseidon both have there own special powers and Zeus can make the world look like a big tornado touched down! Poseidon could make the whole world one big flood because of all the water he can produce.
Zeus thinks Poseidon stole his Master lighting bolt and so they are fighting! A big Tsunami is about to strike off the coast of Long island New York the sky is turning black lighting is flashing all of the people that live on Long island are trying to get evacuated but it is really hard because there is a lot of people!
Bam that is the sound of the thunder because Zeus is mad that some one stole his lighting bolt. It will become a dark day and the ocean would start to get big and dangerous. The brothers can battle each other with weather but while they are battling, Hades will try to sneak something behind their backs. It will enlarge them even more and they will have more problems than ever.
During all the fights that have happen between Zeus and Poseidon they caused natural storms Tornado's and Hurricanes. While Zeus and Poseidon have been fighting when sky and sea combined is trouble. Zeus is blaming his brother for something that he didn't do and when they are beating each other Hades might come from the Underworld and try to take over. When tornado's strike they destroy people and their homes.
!Deadly lighting! Flash floods our coming! A Hurricane rolls in with aggressive thunder. Water falls from the sky flooding everything on land. Poseidon and Zeus are fighting and destroying everything in its way. Zeus and Poseidon are fighting over a lighting bolt that he thought that Poseidon's son Percy Stole.
Zeus,god of the sky, and Poseidon god of the sea, go to war again! The first time these two all mighty gods went to was World War two and that was mostly their kids. In this horrific battle Poseidon strikes first with a flood that rushes the California coast and strands everyone on the pinnacle of their houses. Zeus was unleashing a huge uncommon blizzard to hit Texas and turns the power off for days. The all mighty god of the sea sends a spine tingling earthquake to Virginia and splits it right down the middle.Poseidon and Zeus strikes up a fierce unforgiving hurricane that demolishes North Carolina and kills 7,000 people.
When Zeus an Poseidon go to war and fight, the "Earth" in the middle of them will be just completely destroyed. With the power of both of them it would probably be like a tornado meets a tsunami would be hurt or even killed, because, they can do a lot of damage with their powers. I think "the Earth" would become a huge piece of something like an ocean or a lake, because Poseidon would win!!
ReplyDeleteIf Zeus and Poseidon go to war, the sky and the ocean would go to war too. Good people will die if this happens. Things will happen for no reason like hurricanes, tsuhhains and tornadoes the ocean and the sky will be in bad shape. Who can stop the war!
ReplyDeleteDue to the terrible fight between Zeus and Poseidon a bunch of storms were created. The sun became sad. It was not able to smile and shine because Zeus clouded the weather from the sky. The sky and the sea have been so mad at each other they created rain, lightning, and tornados. One tornado turned to a dark grey color and spinned hatefully through the land. Suddenly the sea reacts and sends a massive tsunami. I think all of this would happen if they began a war. Hopefully Percy will find out what really happened when he go's on the quest and reports everything when he gets back, so there will be no war between Zeus and Poseidon.
ReplyDeleteYours is the best because you had good description and it was awesome.
DeleteI like this one, because it is better the the rest. Of course.
DeleteWhen Zeus and Poseidon start fighting bad things start to happen. The waves start to crash and the lighting starts to roar and that's how we know that Zeus and Poseidon are at war!. During this fight, homes would be gone and the world would be devastated because with every punch the world would start to go down and there would be nowhere to go to stay alive. Billions of people would be homeless and thousands would be dead. The earth would be split open and lava would come oozing out.
ReplyDeleteIf Zeus and Poseidon went to war again it would be a tragedy on the whole world! Things would start happening because the gods have created it. Such as hurricanes, earthquakes, and even floods. The last time there was a war like this it was between Zeus and Poseidon kids and that cause World War Two! Now imagine that! If their kids can cause something that big then what can they do? And reminding that Zeus is the god of the skies and Poseidon is the god of the sea and earthquakes. So we’re talking about homes being destroyed and people getting killed in ways that you can't even imagine. The waves would be strong the skies would be so dark you couldn't tell if it was night or day, things would be blown left to right. The earth would be destroyed.
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite because there is allot of description and I wouldn't want that to happen because that would be very bad
DeleteExcellent details! Proofread for complete sentences - you have some fragments here.
DeleteHurricanes and Lightning are coming ! Hurricanes will damage people’s house’s, cars. Trees will be getting knocked down by the strong wind. Lightning will light up the dark sky, lightning will also damage power, by people not having electricity in their home.
ReplyDeleteapostrophes show possession... people's is correct the houses belong to the people but house's is incorrect that should be houses (no apostrophe)
DeleteProofread for complete sentences. You have a string of commas here
The lightning flashes and crackles in the sky!!! With loud noises and its dark outside. The hurricane is getting closer and the wind is blowing 50 mph while rain is coming down. Zeus is fighting Poseidon as lightning flashes in the sky. While Poseidon is frightening back the hurricane is getting worse. Percy is going to find the light bulb in the underworld and give it back to Zeus.
ReplyDeleteI love your details about Zeus and Poseidon, but Percy details was good on what he will do to help out Zeus.
DeleteYou really paint the picture with words here! Nice job!
DeleteIf Zeus and Poseidon ever had a war the war would be very stormy and bad.
ReplyDeleteThunder and lightning would make the skies dark ,cloudy and a lot of heated wind blowing around. Flooding would be a lot of water traveling and damaging things. Zeus would be striking lightning with all his might in the sky to fight Poseidon. Poseidon would also be fighting back with strong, furious waves to fight back Zeus to defend himself. Percy also helps Zeus by going to the underworld to get the lightening bolt to bring back to Zeus to help him.
If the sky and sea got into a war there would be a lot of rain pounding on the ground and lighting crackling in the sky. The sea would crash against the edges of land crashing erosion and flooding. The black sky would like mid-night over the sea spinning like a mixer was put on high!
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DeleteI love yours! It has so much description in it, that gives it all the detail you need. (: Defiantly favorite!
DeleteYours is the best because you use so much description and such good details! good job!
Deletelove the similie!!
DeleteIf Zeus and Poseidon go to war it could effect the whole mortal world! If the war is bad enough it could kill every one in the world. Zeus and Poseidon both have there own special powers and Zeus can make the world look like a big tornado touched down! Poseidon could make the whole world one big flood because of all the water he can produce.
ReplyDeleteZeus thinks Poseidon stole his Master lighting bolt and so they are fighting! A big Tsunami is about to strike off the coast of Long island New York the sky is turning black lighting is flashing all of the people that live on Long island are trying to get evacuated but it is really hard because there is a lot of people!
ReplyDeleteBam that is the sound of the thunder because Zeus is mad that some one stole his lighting bolt. It will become a dark day and the ocean would start to get big and dangerous. The brothers can battle each other with weather but while they are battling, Hades will try to sneak something behind their backs. It will enlarge them even more and they will have more problems than ever.
ReplyDeleteI like this one
DeleteGood description... I like yours and i like how you used 'bam' in the beginning to grab some attention!
DeleteI like this one it has a lot of details in it!
DeleteI like this one!! The word bam was a good word that you put in for the sound of lightening. You also have good descriptions.
DeleteI agree Aja! Use punctuation to really make it pop. Bam! That is the ....
DeleteDuring all the fights that have happen between Zeus and Poseidon they caused natural storms Tornado's and Hurricanes. While Zeus and Poseidon have been fighting when sky and sea combined is trouble. Zeus is blaming his brother for something that he didn't do and when they are beating each other Hades might come from the Underworld and try to take over. When tornado's strike they destroy people and their homes.
ReplyDelete!Deadly lighting! Flash floods our coming! A Hurricane rolls in with aggressive thunder. Water falls from the sky flooding everything on land. Poseidon and Zeus are fighting and destroying everything in its way. Zeus and Poseidon are fighting over a lighting bolt that he thought that Poseidon's son Percy Stole.
ReplyDeleteProofread!! our should be are, we do not start sentences with punctuation (typo before Deadly)
Deletegood details though!
Zeus,god of the sky, and Poseidon god of the sea, go to war again! The first time these two all mighty gods went to was World War two and that was mostly their kids. In this horrific battle Poseidon strikes first with a flood that rushes the California coast and strands everyone on the pinnacle of their houses. Zeus was unleashing a huge uncommon blizzard to hit Texas and turns the power off for days. The all mighty god of the sea sends a spine tingling earthquake to Virginia and splits it right down the middle.Poseidon and Zeus strikes up a fierce unforgiving hurricane that demolishes North Carolina and kills 7,000 people.
ReplyDeleteNice vocabulary Michael like the story
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